We have been trying to find a way to share your feedback on the draft with the world.
What follows is a list of links, each one will take you to a google doc with the feedback we have received so far. You can not edit these documents, however you can email any of your thoughts or feedback to us here and it will be incorporated into these documents.
We are posting feedback anonymously and have a list of contributors; doing it this way enables people to be open and honest without any concern of reprisals. We will also incorporate feedback currently provided on facebook in due course.
Where feedback has been provided on the specific wordings we have not included that here but kept it separately for the redrafting that we hope to take place in January/February time. We will also incorporate the feedback from group discussions in due course.